Talk:Sex141

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Dick Kimball in topic December 2013 raids

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...an unnamed US officials privately...

Please clarify if this means "...an unnamed US official privately..." (the more likely) or "...unnamed US officials privately..." I didn't want to risk changing it myself to the wrong one. Dick Kimball (talk) 12:37, 6 January 2014 (UTC)Reply

December 2013 raids

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... in Hong Kong, Kowloon and the New Territories."

Hong Kong consists of three main regions: Hong Kong Island, the New Territories, and the Kowloon Peninsula. This might be clearer if it read, "...in all three main regions of Hong Kong: Hong Kong Island, the Kowloon Peninsula, and the New Territories." [1] Dick Kimball (talk) 13:01, 6 January 2014 (UTC)Reply

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