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no problem.. i can't write either but... can you type chinese? i would be grateful if you would pls type out the original texts in chinese for me.. just for the 4 titles

and i guess it's time to *STOP* putting in new stuff as well. lots of works to be done.. major clean up and editing... rewording... etc thx


i am sorry for making you feel "odd", in fact, this is my own translation from chinese. because of my relatively poor english language, i won't mind if you change it~~ thx~


0101SOht))))))))))

would you mind letting me know the topics(under Contribution to Journalism)in Chinese so maybe some of us can make better translation? cos ...

reforming the style and practice of newspaper; combating censorship; positioning the characteristics of reporters; setting the objectivity of newspaper.

sound really odd(and Chinese-like) and i have no idea as to what they should be thx!!

ps)thx for adding the reference list guys :) --0101LAIsy 04:53, 20 Oct 2004 (UTC)


hi, everyone. coz i got a technical problem before, can't edit it successfully, so im so late to come here, sorry :P but im still dunno how to upload the images successfully. i tried it several times in this afternoon. im told its successfully uploaded, but i can't see anything wht i hv posted....how come??? >< can anyone help me out??? thats the image of Jingbao. thanks


i am a freshmen 0101SOht and start to work on this project now. i am facing great difficulties on translating chinese words to english. the first one is "申報". please post the words if anyone find that translation version.


hey guys and hello to classmates from JMSC0101~ I am just starting this entry and hopefully can put in more information eventually.. need all of you to help out. ^__^ btw...219.79.36.7 was me too=.="""


hi there sorry to around late, (indeed I had written two sentences in the second day after the project title was released, but had forgotten to log in...stupid me...)had sooooo much to do last week. It looks like here's not much to write about Shao, is there? Seems to be the case that we have to work extra hard. Let's do it together!


hi this is 0101LAIsy again@@~ good to see you here... i was wondering where all our teammates were:p ahh...I thought I started this page... did wikipedia deleted your sentences because you didn't log in? that sucks.... >_< btw i think it isn't that hard to find info about Shao... i just searched on the internet and saw a few good ones@_@ we just gotta work hard to put things together. add oil^O^


Hello! i am sindy! nice to meet you all! hope we can try our best in this wikipedia!


"In order to promote the revolutionary journalism, Shao widely spread patriotism and democracy all around China."

Hi I am just wondering what these sentences mean..? I can't really understand them and they sound very "Chinese" to me....is this my problem only or something else? pls help to clarify this.

also... should we try to put things into catagories? im thinking about this but not quite sure how sould we do this thx all


oh.. you cannot understand this setence .. maybe this's my problem ..sorry what i mean is during Shao's time in Beijing, due to the new cultural movement, Shao wanted to spread out the ideas of patriotism and democracy so as to improve jounralism in a revolution way. actually, this sounds a bit complicated. if you relly find it hard to understand,you can amend or simply delete it.thz!

concerning the categories, i have the same idea.. i read some other articles, as if they divide the article into the topics, like, biography, contribution to journalism, etc.... oh.. can we do this in similar way?


hi~ thx for explaining.. now it's much more clear:) if you can, would u mind typing out your meaning in Chinese so that maybe I or somebody else can make some changes to the sentences? I just wanna make sure I get what you mean. let's add oil^O^


hi people. i;m 0101LUIkwN, i've written some really simple stuff here ages ago, thanx for all the new things added. is there anything else we can add on? should distribute our labour and make this a better page than any other ones? i'm not good with computers, but i'll try my best to find as much info on shao as i can.


Hi this is 0101CHINsy(well, feel like a prisoner with a number). Can anyone help me to add the Chinese names of a certain newspapers back? Some terms also need to be linked. I'm totally helpless in learning how to do the job. Someone please kindly help with that. Thank you. One other thing is, does anyone have any suggestions on whether the part on politics should be shorten or not, or whether sub-headings should be added.


Hi, concerning the part of politics, i think if the article can focus more on the shao's participation in communist party, it will be perfect.. coz he was dead coz of this.. but it is just my personal opinion. it may not be good.... thankz!


which link do you wanna add? just put [ [ and then put ] ] (without the spaces in between [ [ and ] ]) and it will automatically link to the right page... very simple^_^ and just let me know what chinese words you wanna add.... i guess many of us can do that too^^~ Good stuff added here... way to go guys!!


hi, I am kevin, I am so sorry that I came so late. I am looking some materials and pictures for this topic.I will uplaod it later.


hey you all... for the part "Contribution to journalism", there are a couple things that i don't understand....

what are the four categories? is somebody gonna write more on those four? i am thinking that this is a little too much.

also... dont you guys think that "positioning the characteristics of reporters" and "setting the objectivity of newspaper" sound kinda weird? they look very Chinese... I have no idea what they mean. can somebody clarify or just change them altogether? thx! 0101LAIsy 05:19, 19 Oct 2004 (UTC)


Wow.... we also need some *major*clean up done~~ == WAY TOO MUCH info == ... things repreating themselves.

after the clean up, do you guys wanna add a reference list? or a timeline? people, let's work together >.</ 0101LAIsy 05:56, 19 Oct 2004 (UTC)

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Here's a tip: you can sign your name by typing ~~~~ . Thanks. Also see Wikipedia:How to edit a page. [[User:Poccil|Peter O. (Talk)]] 04:56, Oct 15, 2004 (UTC)

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Hey Folks, there is too much chinglish (Chinese sounding English) going on here. its time to edit edit edit. consider organizing your first paragraph like Chen Duxiu's page. the first paragraph right now really gets in the way of the second paragraph, which is really your lead paragraph, and even that really need further rewriting. (JMSC0101 TA - Li) Lfcho 14:59, 19 Oct 2004 (UTC)