Talk:Shawn Sedlacek/GA1

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 00:22, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

• "low-to-mid 90 miles per hour (140 km/h) range" - I'm not sure what's wrong here, because the convert template is used. But the Google unit conversion thing is saying that 90mph is actually about 145 km/h and that 140 km/h is only 87 mph.
  • Weird! Fixed manually. I checked, and it looks like 137 km/h for 85 mph is correct. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 21:10, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
• Question about single-A, double-A, and triple-A: I'd always been under the impression that these were proper nouns. Does WP:BASEBALL have a specific recommendation for capitalization here?
  • They're usually capitalized, so I'll change. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 21:10, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
• "After making three starts for Wichita to begin the 2002 season, Sedlacek was promoted to Omaha (now known as the Royals) on April 20" - This may not be known, as minor league transactions in the early days of the internet aren't always well recorded, but was Sedlacek demoted to Wichita after his down performance in Omaha the prior year, or was it something else?
• "Sedlacek attributed his struggles to fatigue, as he was in the process of setting a new career high in innings pitched" - is it worthwhile to note what the career high in innings pitched between Wichita, Omaha, and KC was?
• Worth mentioning the prose that he was a righthander?
• References look fine; the image is properly licensed

Really good work here! There's not much work needed here. Hog Farm _Talk 05:26, 11 September 2021 (UTC)