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Advert writing
editHi, I put the advert template on the article. It's mostly fine, but it reads a lot like a resume. Some of the works listed that he produced don't seem very influential or notable. Some of the sentences also read too complimentary or try to play up how important some things are; all needs to be toned down.
The article is mostly well written other than the bare URLs instead of references and occasional advert writing toobigtokale (talk) 21:18, 17 July 2023 (UTC)