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who requested them on the themes "moon", "flowers", and "snow". – Does the body specifically say that Zenno requested to have this theme? From what I read, Utamaro used this theme, but there was no mention of Zenno requesting it. Sorry if I missed it.
The paintings have a reputation as Utamaro's most ambitious works – "have a reputation of being Utamaro's ..."
two are now in American collections – Make sure to add the location of the museums in the body (i.e. "Freer Gallery of Art in Washington, D.C." and "collection of the Wadsworth Atheneum in Hartford, Connecticut"), just like you did at Fukagawa no Yuki, saying "Okada Museum of Art (ja) in the town of Hakone in Japan". That way this is cited.
and are the only known Utamaro paintings he did not sign – since it is assumed in context that we are speaking about Utamaro, I would change to “are the only known paintings Utamaro did not sign”.
Shinagawa no Tsuki (品川の月, "Moon in Shinagawa", late 18th century) is also known as Tsukimi no Zashiki Zu (月見の座敷図, "Picture of parlour moon-viewing") or Moonlight Revelry at Dozō Sagami. – This stand-alone paragraph needs a source.
It resides in the collection of the Freer Gallery of Art – link Freer Gallery of Art
in a two-story yūkaku pleasure house – remove link per WP:OVERLINK
capital of Edo (modern Tokyo) – remove link per WP:OVERLINK; Edo is mentioned in the first section. Please add (modern Tokyo) there instead
It was owned by Sagamiya Chūbei – is this a pleasure house or a person? Because if it is a pleasure house, I would word: “Sagamiya Chūbei, the most prosperous pleasure house in Shinagawa.”
Why don't all of the footnotes have a source? Would you be able to add for each, if appropriate?
The footnotes without sources only give the Japanese renderings of the names in the text. They're not statements requiring sources, and regardless, if they were considered inline, the "source" would be the following source in the text. Curly "JFC" Turkey🍁¡gobble!01:04, 29 October 2017 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for taking this! I won't be able to get to the rest of this right away, but I just wanted to point out in response to WP:OVERLINK that (a) I think you mean MOS:DUPLINK (WP:OVERLINK refers to linking to terms readers should be familiar with) and (b) per DUPLINK, repeating links in the lead & body is acceptable, especially given that the lead is supposed to be a summary of the body (the body should be independent of the lead). Curly "JFC" Turkey🍁¡gobble!01:14, 29 October 2017 (UTC)Reply
MX—Hi, I'm really sorry, I just haven't had the time to give to this, and I probably won't for the next couple days at least. I know you're supposed to close this down after a certain amount of inactivity—it wouldn't bother me if you had to do that. I can just relist. Curly "JFC" Turkey🍁¡gobble!04:07, 6 November 2017 (UTC)Reply
@Curly Turkey: Hi, there's no need to fail this nomination when it is so close to promotion. Would you be able to address the three points below so I can pass this review? I've taken care of the rest. MX (✉ • ✎) 01:24, 8 November 2017 (UTC)Reply
It was owned by Sagamiya Chūbei – is this a pleasure house or a person? Because if it is a pleasure house, I would word: “Sagamiya Chūbei, the most prosperous pleasure house in Shinagawa.”
Kamaya Ihē commissioned the paintings – who is this person? I would add a short description (i.e. "merchant", like you did with Zenno)
Shinagawa no Tsuki (品川の月, "Moon in Shinagawa", late 18th century) is also known as Tsukimi no Zashiki Zu (月見の座敷図, "Picture of parlour moon-viewing") or Moonlight Revelry at Dozō Sagami. – This stand-alone paragraph needs a source.