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Difficult one this
editThis is quite a difficult martial art to write an article about, as it has some martial applications, but is based upon using psychic energy to defeat an opponent. Dessydes
- Perhaps, but the article is in absurdly bad shape as things stand. I saw it on "Mind, Body & Kickin' Moves" (where it came across as psychobabble nonsense) and looked it up here to find gibberish. Can a acknowledgeable practitioner improve it? JJL (talk) 03:53, 8 February 2008 (UTC)
Well then, there's my challenge. Shintaido is certainly not psychobabble nonsense, and it doesn't use psychic energy to defeat an opponent - in fact it doesn't aim to defeat oopponents at all. I'll rewrite it and look forward to your comments later.
New Work
editA lot of work has been done on this page now. How does one request to remove hidden categories that suggest content is unreliable?Edobarn (talk) 00:25, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Citations
editGood talking to you both today. Let's use this page to find a list of citations bulk out the article a bit and make it more authoritative. Silhouettist (talk) 20:10, 13 January 2015 (UTC)
Agreed.ISC-dlo (talk) 04:15, 15 January 2015 (UTC)