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Improvement tags
editHi Ukhome
Can you explain why you are so vigorously against adding any improvement tags to the article? Do you disagree that it can be improved? I think that, at the moment, the article is not structured as well as it could be (Band history too far down), the lead section doesn't tell the reader why the band is important or notable in the first place, the members-section contains too much unsourced trivia, and the grammar in almost all sections is rather bad ("They made a good style of music", "The album got a good popularity and became a good albums of the year 2004", "They have seen to performed in mainstream open air concerts mostly").
Do you disagree that the article can still use work, or do you intend to fix all those problems yourself, or do you have some other reason why you don't want any improvement tags on the article? Please also note that you do not WP:OWN this article.
AmaltheaTalk 11:16, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
- Since you didn't answer but instead chose to remove my question I have restored the issue tag. If you disagree with it I urge you to discuss it here first, per WP:Consensus and WP:BRD. --AmaltheaTalk 12:23, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
Suggest me
editok sorry for the violations
Now please suggest me for the article that how can improve it?and when should i remove the tags?--Ukhome (talk) 14:13, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
- I mentioned some issues in the section above already. I personally would heavily shorten the members section, and only keep the name and instrument of each artist. Favourite band and favourite artist definitely have no place here, and I'm not sure what x-band is? If that stands for other bands the musician has played with then they should only be named if they are notable themselves.
You could also have a look at some other smaller band articles, like Hater (band), Fuel (band) or Faun (band). --AmaltheaTalk 15:22, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
Album title
editPlease correct the last album name. That should be Shironamhin Robindronath instead of Rabindronath.--Tuhin (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 11:44, 30 September 2010 (UTC).
- Done, thanks. Seems there was a typo in your title though. Amalthea 12:27, 30 September 2010 (UTC)
Request to Move
editTanzir Tuhin is redirected to the page. please move the article only Shironamhin--Rafaell Russell (talk) 18:33, 26 October 2014 (UTC)