Talk:Sie werden aus Saba alle kommen, BWV 65/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:50, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
Happy to take on this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 08:50, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
- Lead
- Can we say something like (German for "They will all come forth out of Sheba") in the lead, and also in similar cases in the main article?
- We could, but typically don't so far, compare BWV 1 --GA
- Fine, if it is not the norm, no need. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 07:43, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
- We could, but typically don't so far, compare BWV 1 --GA
- Would be good to add "composer" or perhaps "German composer" before Bach.
- same (a cantata is always composed, and there was no Germany in a political sense at his time) --GA
- Fine, if it is not the norm, no need. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 07:43, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
- same (a cantata is always composed, and there was no Germany in a political sense at his time) --GA
- What is "Sanctus"?
- good catch, linked now --GA
- Can "movement", "librettist", "oboes da caccia", "basso continuo", "secco", "chorale" and "horn" be wikilinked? Feel free to ignore any if they would appear too common to a reader well-versed with such compositions :)
- movement, librettist, chorale: yes, instruments: better in Baroque instrumental ensemble, secco: is explained in recitative --GA
- History and words
- You may wish to repeat the links from the lead in the main article.
- tried --GA
- Can "D major" be linked? Also, why exclude this from the lead?
- yes, done, - in the lead, only the load of work should be shown, the key of this piece (which isn't the cantata doesn't matter --GA
- but it as assumed to be stanza I think it should be "is", not "as".
- you are so right
- The source for the last line?
- any from Christmas oratorio, - do we have to copy? --GA
- Well, just don't leave anything without an inline citation, raises eyebrows. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 07:43, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
- I gave it a ref --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:50, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
- Well, just don't leave anything without an inline citation, raises eyebrows. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 07:43, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
- any from Christmas oratorio, - do we have to copy? --GA
- Scoring and structure
- Delink recitative and aria, they are duplinks.
- yes, they are, but readers may jump to this from the TOC --GA
- Oh, I thought we could do without them. No trouble. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 07:43, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
- yes, they are, but readers may jump to this from the TOC --GA
- Music
- Its melody, in triple time is set for four parts. Is the comma needed or should we add a comma after "time"?
- added, good point --GA
- Selected recordings
- on the Bach-Cantatas website Perhaps add "official" to this, as there could be many others of the same sort but unofficial?
- but is it? - it's a great website, but to be used with care, - I rely on it only for the recordings which are documented very well, up to the names of instrumentalists, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:02, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
- You mean it is not official? No changes needed then. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 07:43, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
- but is it? - it's a great website, but to be used with care, - I rely on it only for the recordings which are documented very well, up to the names of instrumentalists, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:02, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
Rest looks good. These points addressed, I would be happy to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 09:03, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for diligent reading and good comments! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:02, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
- And thanks from my side for writing such a masterpiece! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 07:43, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
Fixes done, can be promoted now. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 01:06, 1 May 2016 (UTC)