Talk:Siempre Tú/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Magiciandude (talk · contribs) 20:44, 31 May 2017 (UTC)

 Doing... Well, well, what do we have here? I looked at the article alerts and found this peculiar article on it. With nothing better to do it, I'll review it. Shouldn't take too long. Erick (talk) 20:44, 31 May 2017 (UTC)

Just giving you a heads up, I will do it either tomorrow or next week (I'll be busy on this weekend). Is that alright with you? Erick (talk) 02:38, 2 June 2017 (UTC)

Alright no more dawdling, let's get this thing started:

Infobox

• I've noticed that the sources for the record label lists "Warner Music Mexico" as the label as opposed to simply "Warner Music". I would change the wikilink to [[Warner Music Group|Warner Music Mexico}} and add the category Warner Music Mexico singles.

Lead

• As mentioned before, "Warner Music" should be changed to "Warner Music Mexico" per the source.
• "It was promoted by an accompanying music video filmed by Manuel Escalante in Mexico and Barcelona" You list a country and then a city from another country and doesn't say where in Mexico exactly (it's a big country so it's pretty vague). According to the article from Publimetro, it was filmed in Mexico City, so the sentence should either say "Mexico and Spain" or "Mexico City and Barcelona".

Background and composition

• "The song was composed by Muñiz in.." It should begin with ""Siempre Tú" was composed by Muñiz in..." as it is a new paragraph and the song's name should mentioned.
• ""Siempre Tú" was released worldwide on 21 April 2017 through Warner Music" See lead section

Reception

• "Antena 1 noted the song's commercial..." → "A reviewer/an editor (whichever you prefer) for Antena 1 noted the song's commercial".

Music video

• "While it was directed by Manuel Escalante of Enjambre Producciones[6] in different locations in Mexico and Barcelona, production and photography was handled by him along with Petter Lettocha and José Casillas." → "It was directed by Manuel Escalante of Enjambre Producciones in different locations in Mexico and Barcelona, while production and photography was handled by him along with Petter Lettocha and José Casillas." Putting "while" in beginning of the sentence implies that an contrast (such as but, however, though) will appear in the sentence.

That's all I've got. Just fix these issues and I'll gladly pass this as GA. Erick (talk) 12:51, 8 June 2017 (UTC)

@Magiciandude: Thank you very much for the review; all done! Let me know if I can do something for you. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:17, 8 June 2017 (UTC)

Awesome! I now pass this article as good article. Great job! If you want to something for me, you can just take a look at any of the albums or songs I've nominated for GA. :P Erick (talk) 13:22, 8 June 2017 (UTC)