Talk:Signals (Regard and Kwabs song)/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:09, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
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I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 08:09, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Infobox looks good!
"who wrote it with Kwabs alongside" → "who served as a co-writer with Kwabs,"""Signals" received critical acclaim from" → "The song received critical acclaim from""who praised its music" → "who praised the music"Mention the synopsis of the video
Background and composition
edit- Looks good!
Reception
edit"received critical acclaim from" → "was met with critical acclaim from"Remove the geographical locations since these introductions are not needed"this festive season."" either add the exclamation mark the source uses or move the full-stop to outside the speech marks per MOS:QUOTE"declared the song as" → "declared the song as a""and radio hit."" → "and radio hit"."
Music video
editRetitle to Promotion"its director, Stephen Agnew, stated "the story of [the" → "its director Stephen Agnew stated: "The story [of the""which display the singer from" → "which display Kwabs from"Specify who is lying and dancing
Track listing
edit"Signals" – 3:18 → "Signals" (Acoustic) – 3:18
Charts
editWeekly charts
edit- Good
Year-end charts
editSince there is only one position, this should not be sortable
Release history
edit- Good
References
edit- Copyvio score looks slightly high at 43.2%; cut down quoting from CelebMix to resolve this
What exactly makes Nieuweplaat a reliable source for ref 8?Same query as above for Out Now Magazine on ref 14
- Both removed. Iaof2017 (talk) 16:07, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
Final comments and verdict
edit- On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 09:15, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
- Hello @Kyle Peake:, thanks for the review. I've addressed your comments. :D Iaof2017 (talk) 17:12, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, I briefly copy edited but good job and a fast one too! --K. Peake 21:46, 5 December 2022 (UTC)