Talk:Single Ladies (Put a Ring on It)/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Adabow in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:07, 17 November 2010 (UTC)
- I can see from here that I will probably not end up passing this. I will just point out some general issues at the moment. I am tempted to quick-fail it, but if substantial improvements are made in the next week or two I will go through the article in more detail.
- File:Singleladiesbk.jpg needs a source
- "Alongside "If I Were a Boy", the song was released as the album's lead single to U.S. radio on October 8, 2008. The song was later released to other international markets as the album's second single after her worldwide hit "If I Were a Boy"." - that is a confusing opening. How was it released first and second? Both with and after "If I Were a Boy"?
- '#1' should be 'number one'
- References in the lead are discouraged. the lead should summarise the article, and not introduce any new facts. Therefore, info in the lead should be referenced in the body of the article
- Some sections, such as 'Background and composition', 'Release and promotion' and 'Awards and recognitions' contain few references and fail Wikipedia's verifiability policy
- Quotes especially should always be followed by a citation
- Chart performance is too long and mentions irrelevant details
- The prose is quite choppy, particularly in the 'Cultural impact' section
- The article needs a very good copy-edit for grammar, flow and readability
Articles you can use as examples are "4 Minutes" (Madonna song), "Fantasy" (Mariah Carey song) and "Halo" (Beyoncé Knowles song). Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:55, 17 November 2010 (UTC)
- I tried to stop this, but nominator reverted me (even s/he is not the main contributor). S/He is not active and I really doubt s/he wiil, and I have no time at moment for improve this, if you believe it should be quick failed (because I do), feel free. TbhotchTalk C. 16:38, 17 November 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks, Tbhotch. Teman13 has not been active in weeks. I will fail the article, as I don't feel it is even near GA standard. Adabow (talk · contribs) 00:47, 18 November 2010 (UTC)