Talk:Slug and Lettuce/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Farrtj in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Greatuser (talk · contribs) Starting review and will comment soon 15:28, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
- Disambiguated pages Greatuser (talk) 17:04, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
- Done I fixed the links Greatuser (talk) 17:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
- Further does not look any more problem, It meets Good article criteria Greatuser (talk) 17:15, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
- Non-reviewer comment: article doesn't seem to meet good article criteria. I have added some points below.
:*"Slug & Lettuce" -> "Slug and Lettuce", the name of the chain.
:*Paragraph finishing with "leaving it with only one location in Scotland, and no presence in Wales" needs to finish with a ref.
- "The chain refreshes its menu twice a year, once for spring/summer and once for autumn/winter" - ref?
- This statement is not a direct quotation, statistic, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statement that is challenged or likely to be challenged, or contentious material relating to living persons; therefore, according to the Good Article criteria, it does not require a reference. Farrtj (talk) 11:24, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
- Articles should always be fully sourced, and I will not permit anyone to pass this unless it is referenced. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
- In response to this I have removed the offending sentences.Farrtj (talk) 22:36, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
- Articles should always be fully sourced, and I will not permit anyone to pass this unless it is referenced. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
- This statement is not a direct quotation, statistic, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statement that is challenged or likely to be challenged, or contentious material relating to living persons; therefore, according to the Good Article criteria, it does not require a reference. Farrtj (talk) 11:24, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
- "Most outlets are situated in town and city centre locations" - ref?
- As before.Farrtj (talk) 11:24, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
- See above. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
- As before.Farrtj (talk) 11:24, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
- All paragraphs in the Operations section are too short and need to be merged with others.
- In the article, explain the reason why the quote by Zoe Williams is needed or how it is relevant, not just have an unexplained quote.
- Merge short paragraphs in the Reception section with others.
- "the South East" -> "South East England"
Review list
edit- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail: