Talk:Snakehead (Fringe)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 13:43, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Plot

1. "Seasickness" should not be in quotes.
2. "In the lab, Walter (John Noble) posits they are gigantic parasitic worms," Replace "they" with "the creatures" or something similar.
3. "They discover a Triad gang member and ties to several shell companies the gang has set up in the U.S." To eliminate confusion, replace "they" with who that are being mentioned (the Fringe team?).

Production

Nothing here.

Reception

Ratings

Nothing here.

Reviews

1. "Critical reception to the episode was generally negative." Replace "to" with "for".
2. "AOL TV's Jane Boursaw believed the worms 'seriously freaky'" Add "were" after "worms".
3. Ref 12 links to Kuro5hin, a website which uses user-generated articles as its contents. Unfortunately, per point 2b of the good article criteria, sites like the one used are not considered reliable, and should never be used on Wikipedia.

Lead

Nothing here.

In conclusion

As usual, a fine article that is close to GA. I'll put it on hold for seven days so that you can make the necessary fixes. Good luck!

I replaced the Kuro5hin ref with 2 better ones, and made your other suggested changes. Thanks very much for the review! :) Ruby2010 comment! 15:13, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

Nice work! Passed. Queenieacoustic (talk) 16:45, 23 June 2011 (UTC)