Talk:So It Goes...

Latest comment: 3 months ago by Brachy0008 in topic GA Review

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 04:08, 1 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

Created by Brachy0008 (talk). Self-nominated at 01:40, 13 March 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/So It Goes...; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

  •   Timely nomination, and the article otherwise meets the size requirements and is cited to generally reliable sources with no copyvios. I had some notability-related concerns but seems like it is an accepted AfC nomination so that's okay.--NØ 18:44, 16 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Nominator: Brachy0008 (talk · contribs) 04:20, 17 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Heartfox (talk · contribs) 17:23, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • "An incorporation of → a combination of
  • "The BBC asserted that" → It would be helpful to say who wrote the article as this implies that the company as a whole is asserting this
  • "a dispute with" redundant
  • "; "So It Goes..." being one of them" → ",including "So It Goes"
  • "Görres recalled that it was a "strange" session for him because he had just gotten out of the shower wrapped in a towel, but he was "very thankful for that"" → I don't know about this sentence
  • "might help her out of her fixations" → specify who "her" is. what fixations?
  • "commended" → commented?
  • "deemed the song insignificant, but cringe-worthy" → why the use of "but"?
  • "also calling it" → also called it
  • studios and track length are given in infobox but not body

Heartfox (talk) 17:23, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

for point 5, it is taken from the source itself. brachy08 (chat here lol) 00:09, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
also, the source did not specify what fixations. brachy08 (chat here lol) 00:10, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
commended is another word for praise. brachy08 (chat here lol) 00:11, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply