Talk:Soak Up the Sun/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:46, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• ""Crow. Crow and" repetitive.
• "other Billboard rankings" link Billboard.
  • I included Billboard and Hot 100 as two separate links, so it's already there
• "the song, featuring Crow performing the song" the song/the song... repetitive.
• "which took place during filming" occurred, it's a passive thing really.
• "Radio & Records's" no need for the last s, it's exempted in this case.
• "During the Glastonbury Festival in June 2019, Crow" do you mean during a live performance?
  • I believe so, looking at the source's context
• "and Billboard magazine" yeah, this should have been linked above, see my second point.
  • Already linked
• What's an "F/X keyboard"?
  • That's the term they use on the liner notes. Looking at a quick Google search, I'm not getting a lot of helpful results. I don't know a lot about instruments, but I think it's a keyboard used for sound effects; probably the ones that can be heard during the intro.
• " Splice Today" what is that?
• "directed the video to "Soak Up the Sun" on Oahu, Hawaii" maybe "directed the video to "Soak Up the Sun" which was filmed on Oahu, Hawaii"?
• We really don't need to link surfboard, surfing, curling iron, hair spray etc.
• ""rock-star surfer" look" that quote isn't referenced.
• "Certifications" table has one entry, so no need to be sortable.
  • As I said on "JCB", cert tables can't be unsortable. Yet.

That's all I have on a first read. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:52, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Okay, done. Take a look at my notes above and make your judgements. If I misunderstood what you were saying about linking Billboard, please let me know. ResPM (T🔈 🎵C) 21:02, 6 September 2021 (UTC)