Talk:Soetran

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:18, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

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• ... that Soetran was nicknamed the Clove Governor after he obliged families in Papua to cultivate cloves? Source: Soetran#Obligatory_Clove_Cultivation

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mayoralty of Bernie Sanders

Created by Jeromi Mikhael (talk). Self-nominated at 16:39, 13 December 2020 (UTC).

• I'll review this nom shortly. Tomobe03 (talk) 13:17, 19 December 2020 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: I would suggest a general copyedit of the prose before the article makes it to the main page. Even though this is not a DYK criterion, the article would benefit from a quick once-over. Tomobe03 (talk) 10:26, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• No images used in the hook - so that segment is moot
• QPQ met - reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Mayoralty of Bernie Sanders

@Tomobe03: Sorry, I think I need to clarify this: Wikiy is a mirror of Wikipedia. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 10:44, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

Ok, I'll check that. Cheers Tomobe03 (talk) 10:48, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

I did not find the site in the list of mirrors here, but let me check some more.Tomobe03 (talk) 13:26, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

• comment: Earwig's copyvio detector flagged this article [1] as a suspected copyvio, but this appears to be a mirror. I have confirmed this with User:Diannaa and they will flag the mirror as such appropriately to avoid future confusion. Tomobe03 (talk) 14:47, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
• comment: The phrase "Clove Governor" is found in the offered source as "gubernur Cengkeh" (p.28), AGF on foreign-language source

Regardless of the above, could you please check these sentences in Military career section:

• Less than a year, in 1963, he was transferred to... - is this meant to be "Less than a year later..."?
• In 1967, he was reassigned to East Java, promoted to Mayor, ... - did you mean Major? Tomobe03 (talk) 14:24, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

I am satisfied that the DYK criteria are met. Tomobe03 (talk) 17:11, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Soetran/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 15:02, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

I will review this article. This is my first bio GAN I review, and I would love to learn many things from this decision. GeraldWL 15:02, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• Keep either "Indonesian" or "Javanese." "Javanese" already covers Indonesia as a whole. In addition, recommend linking. GeraldWL 15:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
• Link regent. GeraldWL 15:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
• Link Trenggalek. GeraldWL 15:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
• Link Irian Jaya. GeraldWL 15:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
• Per tag, I suggest expanding the lead. GeraldWL 14:05, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done and lead expanded. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 14:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

Military career

• Paragraphs 1, 2, and 3 used two citations, placed them at the same place. Mind relocating to the claim(s) it supports? GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done except for the 3rd paragraph; citation 1 and 2 is reinforcing each other regarding the dates and fact. --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

• "After the war"-- what war? GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

Trenggalek to Trenggalih

• The subsection name is not so clear. Suggest renaming to "Renaming Trenggalek" GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

• There's no word on the aftermath: is it renamed or not. Suggest adding that up, if there is one. GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

Parasamya Purnakarya Nugraha

• First two sentence supported by two citations. Suggest relocate. GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

Legacy

• "the Soetran award"-- suggest capitalizing to "the Soetran Award." GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• Three redlinks. Either interwiki link, create stub (if person warrants a WP article), or remove redlinks. GeraldWL 15:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done Removed redlinks. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 00:48, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

Governor of Irian Jaya

• Link Irian Jaya. GeraldWL 14:08, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
• Acub Zainal is redlinked. Suggest removing. GeraldWL 14:08, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done except point 1, as it is already linked in the lead. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 14:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

Irian Jaya earthquake

• "As a result, 12 large villages in the X Valley were swallowed by the Earth." What is "X Valley" and suggest rewording the metaphoric "swallowed by the Earth." GeraldWL 09:10, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done Ah, my apologies. The X Valley was without name prior to the 2000s; it is now known as the Baliem Valley. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 12:35, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

Jeromi Mikhael, last thing: in paragraph 3, ref 31 and 27 is used at the same time. Similar case at "Death", last sentence. Mind relocating or removing one of them, if appropriate? GeraldWL 12:53, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 13:01, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

Jeromi Mikhael, in my opinon this has passed the GA criteria. Congrats! GeraldWL 13:03, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Gerald Waldo Luis, I've done what you requested. Please check. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 14:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

Jeromi Mikhael, see "Irian Jaya earthquake" above. After that is resolved, I'll do a linking copyedit, and that should make it for a good article. Apologies for the wait. GeraldWL 09:11, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed