Talk:Son of a Gun (Homicide: Life on the Street)/GA1

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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 22:35, 17 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Hi, I am reviewing this article and have found a few nitpicks. Xtzou (Talk) 22:35, 17 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

  • ""Son of a Gun" was written by James Yoshimura based on a story by executive producer Tom Fontana, and was directed by Nick Gomez. It was the first Homicide: Life on the Street episode written by Yoshimura, who would serve as a writer and eventually supervising producer throughout the entirety of the series.[1] "Son of a Gun" featured a blending of hard-edged emotion and amusing character comedy, the combination of which would become common in future Yoshimura-penned episodes.[2] "Son of a Gun" was originally supposed to be the fourth episode of the first season of Homicide:" - Three out of four sentences contain the article name.
  • Having read a couple of the articles now on this TV series, it there any explanation for why the episodes are continuing a downward trend in viewership, despite raves by critics?

Everything else about the article seems fine. Xtzou (Talk) 22:51, 17 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
    I corrected a few minor wording and punctuation issues.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    Article is well sourced. I see no original research.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    The article remains focused on the subject but covers the relevant areas.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall: A wonderful, concise article
    Pass/Fail:  

A fine GA. Congratulations! Xtzou (Talk) 13:18, 18 April 2010 (UTC)Reply