Talk:Sonic Chaos/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:25, 17 March 2021 (UTC)Reply


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  • Why isn't the article called "Sonic the Hedgehog Chaos" per the lead and the infobox?
  • "Robotnik, who has" no comma.
    • Removed
  • Lead "Aspect Co." infobox "Aspect".
    • Aspect (video game company) redirects to Aspect Co., but since they're linked as "Aspect Co." later in the page, it should be consistent.
  • Link handheld.
    • Done
  • Link port.
    • Done
  • "an already-existing" already- adds nothing.
    • Removed
  • "had a far better grasp" better than who or what?
    • The sentence says they had a better idea on how to design the game. Seems pretty clear to me.
  • "in recent years it has gained a more average" do you mean a few years after release or recent as in 2018 (for example)?
    • Changed to say "retrospective"
  • Shima & Mikusa not referenced or mentioned in the article.
  • If File:GGSonicChaosSE.png is replaceable per the fair use criteria noted, it should be replaced.
    • Changed to not replaceable.
  • "ingame" is that even a word?
    • "in-game" is fine, which I've changed it to
  • "power-up" link.
    • Done
  • Gameplay section is completely unreferenced.
    • What an absolutely egregious error on my end. Added proper citations.
  • "'where completing it will" -> "which, if completed, will..."
    • Fixed. It does look better that way.
  • "the best ending" are there multiple endings?
    • Yeah, there's multiple endings that are based on the amount of Chaos Emeralds collected. This was something I forgot to mention. Added.
  • ""version of Sonic the Hedgehog 2, and" overlinked.
  • "had a better idea" than who?
    • Changed to "grasp" since that's what the lead uses
  • "as a unique playable" unique?
    • Tails was technically playable in Sonic the Hedgehog 2, though Sonic Chaos is the first time he is a fully-playable character with his own unique abilities. Reworded for clarity.
  • "release of Sonic CD.[4][6]" overlinked.
    • Removed link
  • "digitally-released" no need to hyphenate.
    • Removed hyphen
  • "Chaos is also included" was.
    • The Game Gear Micro is still available for purchase, so there are still ways of playing this version of the game. Had it either been discontinued or it no longer exists, saying it "was" included would be appropriate.
  • Link 16-bit first time.
    • Done
  • "for Sonic Mega Collection Plus," overlinked.
    • Don't remember linking this again. Fixed

That's it, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:29, 18 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Ok, no worries, it looks fine now, so promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 07:23, 19 March 2021 (UTC)Reply