Talk:Southern red bat

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Simmy27star in topic Could use some copy-editing love

Could use some copy-editing love

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I'm not sure if this is covered in the Manual of Style, but the article reads like it was written for a grade school audience. I'm not bold enough to make the changes necessary to bring this more in line with the quality of other Wikipedia articles, but perhaps someone more experienced might give it a go. TennysonXII (talk) 06:49, 19 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

I can't believe it's been 8.5 years since this comment, but yes it is terrible. Hopefully I fixed it. Simmy27star (talk) 05:11, 17 October 2020 (UTC)Reply