Talk:Southsea Castle/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Hchc2009 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:44, 17 May 2016 (UTC)Reply


I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:44, 17 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • No DABs, external links good.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • Need a little more context for Operation Grasp in the lede.
  • Convert measurements only on first use. You've got 8 inches converted at least twice.
  • A couple of duplicate links.
  • Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:26, 29 May 2016 (UTC)Reply