Talk:Soviet cruiser Krasny Kavkaz/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 22:40, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   prose: (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

1. Laid down on 18 October 1913 at the Rossud Dockyard as Admiral Lazarev for the Imperial Russian Navy as a cruiser of the Svetlana-class, she was launched on 8 June 1916. Construction was abandoned in 1917 during the October Revolution when the ship was 63% complete. Needs an inline citation.

• Done

2. The hull was relatively undamaged and the Soviets decided to finish the ship to a modified design. She was renamed Krasnyi Kavkaz on 14 December 1926, and completed to a modernized design, being commissioned on 25 January 1932. Needs an inline citation.

• Done

3. her catapult removed. Suggest - her catapult was removed

• Indeed

4. position. Suggest - positions

• See above. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:05, 6 March 2011 (UTC)

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 18:20, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments on the PoW GA page :). Anyway in mother Russia you don't nominate GA, GA nominates you. Passed. Thurgate (talk) 20:59, 6 March 2011 (UTC)