Talk:Spencer Heath (baseball)/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:30, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
Am reviewing for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 20:30, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
edit- "Spencer Paul Heath, Jr." - problem relating to MOS:JR here
- Heath's nationality will need to be mentioned in the first paragraph of the lead
- "Listed at 6'0", 170 lb.," - the convert template will be better off used on these figures
- Think the lead can be expanded with further details of Heath's playing career
Early life
edit- "Spencer Paul Heath, Jr.," - MOS:JR problem here
- "Spencer Heath, Sr.," - same as above
- "Well-known around Chicago for his skills in semipro baseball," - semi-professional
Winnipeg Maroons (1919)
edit- Winning percentage would be better off wikilinked to the appropriate article for non-baseball readers
Chicago White Sox (1920)
edit- "Baseball historian Frank Russo points out that this was difficult," - the text in bold is informal; a word such as noted is more appropriate in this instance
- The term inning can be wikilinked to its article only on the first mention
Later years
edit- "Heath returned to playing semipro ball after his time with the White Sox." - semi-professional baseball
- Semipro ball is a common term in the baseball world; I never see it spelled out. I linked it to an appropriate article in case people wonder what it means. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 01:37, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
Will put the review on hold to enable the nominator to address or query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 21:14, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Sanfranciscogiants17: Now promoting to GA class MWright96 (talk) 06:57, 3 July 2021 (UTC)