Talk:Spies Reminiscent of Us/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: –MuZemike 23:41, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

Prose issue

• Angered, Peter begins frequenting the toilet at Cleveland's old house until it is sold to Chevy Chase and Dan Aykroyd. → Should be rewritten to clarify the context behind Chase's and Aykroyd's move into Cleveland's house; it sounds like Peter's frequent bathroom trips have caused Chase and Aykroyd to move in.
  • Done. Gage (talk) 01:58, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Verifiability issues

• Last sentence, first paragraph of the "Cultural references" section (should also be merged into another paragraph IMO): The underlying plot of brainwashed sleeper agents who are activated by a code phrase is identical to the Charles Bronson movie Telefon. → Needs a citation
  • Someone else added that, and the statement is OR in my opinion. I've removed it, and merged the first two paragraphs. Gage (talk) 02:01, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
• [1] → Dead link. Looks like the entire site moved to http://beta.dishonline.com for some reason, but I cannot find an archived copy of that URL anywhere.
  • Removed it; the commentary ref covers it. Gage (talk) 01:58, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
• [2] → Unreliable source; it's from Wikia, which anyone can edit it. Either change to a reliable source or remove what that source covers.
  • That was added by some random user accidentally. I've now removed it, as the statement had no reason being in the CR section to begin with. Gage (talk) 01:58, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Conclusions

On hold pending improvements/resolution to the issues I have mentioned above (normally about 7 days maximum). –MuZemike 23:41, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

Passed. Just keep in mind, for inline citations, that you only need to include one citation at the end of whatever you're referencing or at the end of the paragraph, whichever comes first. That being said, nice work! –MuZemike 16:39, 3 March 2011 (UTC)