Talk:Spongiforma squarepantsii/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Miyagawa in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 20:53, 5 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Ok, this one caught my attention :) - I'll give it a read through now and add my review below. Miyagawa (talk) 20:53, 5 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • Discovery and naming: Do we know Desjardin's first name? Also it seems weird to mention him in this way without explaining who he was first.
  • Discovery and naming: I'd suggest adding a cite directly after "similarity with the cartoon character."
  • Discovery and naming: Should this section be titled Taxonomy and classification?
  • Description: "and has dimensions of" - would something along the lines of "usually measures" make the sentence flow better?
  • Description: "vaguely fruity or strongly musty" - quote needs a cite.
  • References: Cite 6 needs to have it's access date in the same format as the other dates.
  • I can't seem to see what's wrong with this, the template formatting is as it should be in all three cases, but it's not displaying the accessdate in two of them. Perhaps this has something to do with the recent rollout of 1.18? Sasata (talk) 04:08, 6 October 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • Images all check out.

Description is good - all unfamiliar terms have have been linked to their respective articles. That's all the issues I can see with this article. Miyagawa (talk) 21:21, 5 October 2011 (UTC)Reply