Talk:Srizbi botnet/GA1

GA Review

For various MOS and prose issues, I am quick failing this article. Examples are seen below:

-First sentence is a run-on sentence

world's (with an apostrophe)

-Lead is too short. Needs to have more than one paragraph -Citations go behind' the period. No spaces after cites either. -botnet doesn't have to be re-linked again if it was mentioned before. -Couple of prose issues:

The "Srizibi Botnet" botnet?

"As of 13 juli 2008" Spanish needs to be converted into English and linked

trojan needs to be linked

dates need to be linked

There is a misformed ref. in "Spread and Botnet Composition"

-Russia needs to be capitalized

don't capitalize bot

In English Wikipedia, we use commas for numbers, such as "10,000". Spanish and other FL wikipedias don't.

"Trough"?

"A spokesman told the press"

Which press? newspaper?

The highly publicizes"?

miranda 02:03, 21 July 2008 (UTC)