Talk:St. Joseph's University (New York)/Archive 1
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Susancsj in topic Biased language?
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Biased language?
Both the mission statement and location, with phrases like "The College aims in this way to prepare each student for a life characterized by integrity, intellectual and spiritual values, social responsibility, and service-a life that is worth of the College's motto, Esse non videri: "To be, not to seem." read more like an advertisement and should be edited for a more neutral tone. --Misogynist 05:38, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
- I have removed both the Location and Mission section. The Mission section was a copyright violation, as it was copied verbatim from the Saint Joseph's College website ([1]), and thus has been removed as per WP:Copyright. The "Location" bit under it was in violation of WP:NOT as it was essentially directions of how to get to the campuses. I have kept the written-like-advertisement tag because the History section is also very POV. Danelo 16:34, 17 July 2007 (UTC)
I deleted the first sentence in the Greek life section due to biased language Susancsj (talk) 17:03, 20 March 2015 (UTC)