Talk:St George's Academy/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:34, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:34, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

• External links OK
• No DABs
• Images appropriately licensed.
• Are any more pictures available of the two campuses?

• Unfortunately not (at least not on the Commons or on Geograph). These photos [1] were hosted on the old school website, but I am not sure they would count as fair use... same applies for images from these old newspaper articles [2] Any ideas? I also can't guarantee that the school was the copyright holder of the first set of images.

• Unless you can inveigle some local Wikipedian to nip down there for a few snaps, I guess we're out of luck.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:37, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

• Watch for overlinking like sixth form in the lede and multiple times elsewhere. this script will show them to you.

• I believe I've got all these now - thanks for pointing me to the tool - it will come in handy in future!

• Link on first use: infants, headmaster, governors, headteacher, block, Schools Curriculum award, revere collar blouse, A-level, BTEC, cabaret

• Done, but I couldn't link "block", so I've called it "classroom block"

• I'm not sure of the exact UK usage, but aren't they just new buildings?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:37, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

• Don't forget about this.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:31, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

• Link or explain further education college, federated and Sixth Form College, sponsors, mixed ability form, pastoral support, lounge suit, blazer, Lord Lieutenant of Lincolnshire

• Done, with a note about the sponsor

• Spell cllrs out.

• Done

• You've got multiple instances of compound adjectives like dark blue, dark grey, etc., that need a hyphen between the words.

• I think I've got them all

• public Services typo?

• The capitalisation is correct; and services is used in the plural, e.g. [3], [4]

• Link the sports that an American wouldn't recognize

• I am not sure which you mean, but I've linked boccia... if there are others, let me know.

• Association football and netball.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:31, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

• Provide conversions from Imperial measurements to metric

• Done, I believe

• Be consistent about using title case in the titles of your references.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:29, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

• Any examples?

• See Title case for info. Examples would be #4 (title case) and #17 for non-title case.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:31, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

• Thanks for taking this on. I've started to reply and will be back later to finish. —Noswall59 (talk) 17:59, 26 October 2015 (UTC).

• It's a good start.

• @Sturmvogel 66: I believed I've addressed everything but the title case matter. —Noswall59 (talk) 15:56, 28 October 2015 (UTC).

• @Sturmvogel 66: Okay, thanks. I think I've converted all the titles to sentence case and linked the two other sports. —Noswall59 (talk) 19:39, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

• Great, but what about "blocks" above?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:49, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

• @Sturmvogel 66: Okay, I forgot about that. I didn't realise the term was not used over the pond either! Well, it looks like I've got them all now. Thanks, —Noswall59 (talk) 22:49, 28 October 2015 (UTC).