Talk:Stacy's Pita Chips

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 4 September 2019 and 4 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): ChristianJT1.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 03:48, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

peer review

In describing what Stacy's Pita Chips are, I would say it's a business and what type of business it is. You could also expand on what Stacey and Marc's core values are that led to them selling to Pepsi instead of the highest bidder. The tone is very factual and the article is well put together, but I would expand on the brand and why that differentiates them and makes them significant. This could be about their values, or the impact of the Stacy's Rise project. LaurenSkirball (talk) 18:06, 17 October 2019 (UTC) LaurenSkirball

I think your article does a good job at explaining the history of the chip company, the products they offer, and the nutritional information. I think overall the only suggestion I would have would be to tie in a reason for this article - why create an article about this chip company? I think if you included a section about this company's relevance to something, or why they're important, it may help clarify the purpose of this article. I think the section you have at the end about Rise Project is a good start to this, but I would try to expand that idea a bit. Kristin.T98 (talk) 21:58, 18 October 2019 (UTC)

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