Talk:Stacy Tessler Lindau

Latest comment: 3 years ago by HickoryOughtShirt?4 in topic Edit request

Edit request

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Please change "Bloomfield Hills" to "Detroit" in both locations.  Done Please change "master's degree" to "bachelor's degree." Please change "personalized community referral platform to support whole-person care" to "personalized community referral platform for every need and every person" per https://nowpow.com/#:~:text=NowPow%20is%20a%20personalized%20community,bridge%20gaps%20in%20community%20care.   Done Please change "In 2020, Tessler Lindau and Kohler" to "In 2017, Tessler Lindau and Kohler"   Done Please change "to use CommunityRX" to "to use CommunityRx."   Done

Enobg (talk) 17:06, 9 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Pinging HickoryOughtShirt?4: Can you review this? WhatamIdoing (talk) 01:53, 13 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
Enobg, why change "master's degree" to "bachelor's degree?" Is an AM degree not a masters? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 02:08, 13 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
HickoryOughtShirt?, This edit is based on the timeline. Tessler Lindau worked for Wall Street Journal upon completion of her bachelor's degree, not master's degree.
Enobg,   Done. By the way, when you ping someone you need to use four ~ to sign your sentence for it to work. I know my username is long and confusing, looking back I should've picked an easier username ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 02:06, 14 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
HickoryOughtShirt? Thanks! Hopefully I did it correctly this time. I think there may have been a slight understanding in my previous request-- I should have been more clear! Under the early life and education section, the previous sentence, "She earned her Bachelor of Arts degree from the University of Michigan, her Master's degree from the University of Chicago, and her medical degree from Brown University" was correct. However, I think you switched the "Master's degree" in this section to "Bachelor's degree." I actually meant for the edit to be in the career section, switching "Upon completing her master's degree" to "Upon completing her bachelor's degree." Enobg (talk) 14:23, 15 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
Enobg, Ohh! That makes sense. You almost did it all correctly, you just forgot the 4 in my username but a lot of people have done that  . HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:32, 15 April 2021 (UTC)Reply