Talk:Standing Up in the Milky Way

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Phill24th in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 02:16, 19 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

Think I'll review this one. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 02:16, 19 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

Here goes:

  • Per WP:RS/IMDB, you should probably replace those cites to it, maybe to something like the episode's credits
  • Two DAB links that need fixing: Enterprise and National Geographic
  • After you've introduced Neil deGrasse Tyson, all following mentions of him should be just "Tyson"
  • I think you should mention the episode's ratings in the reception section
  • "and ready for shipment on June 29, 2014." -> "and is scheduled to be released on June 29, 2014" sounds better
  • You should mention Nicholson's 8.5 grade
  • "Positive review was also given by Slate journalist Phil Plait" Shouldn't there be an "a" before "Positive review"?

Looks ok. I'll put in on hold. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 18:03, 20 April 2014 (UTC)Reply