Talk:Stanley Browne (RNZAF officer)/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Zawed in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:52, 10 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:52, 10 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • Images appropriately licensed
  • a wall in the shower block clarify this, I had to read it twice to figure out what you meant
  • Have rephrased a bit, how does it work for you?
  • Any idea which destroyer picked them up?
  • No the source doesn't specify this.
  • No 's' in Rhubarbs
  • Fixed.
  • of the HMS Warspite no 'the' and tell the reader that Warspite was a battleship
  • Fixed and done.
  • Do you know what mark of Spitfire his old unit was flying when her rejoined them?
  • Have added