Talk:Staphylococcus nepalensis

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Sphilbrick in topic Copyright review
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See Joachim Spergser et al

Some phrases are exact, and arguably, understandable.

Source Article
Resistant to novobiocin, bacitracin, vibriostatic agent O/129, lysozyme, metronidazole and optochin It is resistant to novobiocin, bacitracin, vibriostatic agent O/129, lysozyme, metronidazole and optochin.

How many ways can you rewrite this sentence?

However, several sentences are copy-paste, where rewrites were possible:

Source Article
Colonies after 2 days on P agar are circular, low-convex, smooth, glossy, opaque white and 2–6 millimeters in diameter. Colonies after 2 days on P agar are circular, low-convex, smooth, glossy, opaque white and 2–6 mm in diameter.
Growth occurs aerobically and anaerobically in the presence of 0–7·5% sodium chloride (NaCl). Growth occurs aerobically and anaerobically in the presence of 0–7·5 % NaCl (w/v).
Predominant fatty acids are ai-C15 : 0, i-C15 : 0 and ai-C17 : 0, whilst i-C17 : 0, C18 : 0, C16 : 0, C20 : 0 and i-C19 : 0 are present in moderate amounts Predominant fatty acids are ai-C15 : 0, i-C15 : 0 and ai-C17 : 0, whilst i-C17 : 0, C18 : 0, C16 : 0, C20 : 0 and i-C19 : 0 are present in moderate amounts.

In my opinion, the article should be removed, not just rewritten. I'm not doing so at this time as a CCI is just starting ,and it may be useful to leave this open for review.--S Philbrick(Talk) 15:31, 13 November 2013 (UTC)Reply