Talk:Staphylococcus nepalensis
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Sphilbrick in topic Copyright review
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Copyright review
editSome phrases are exact, and arguably, understandable.
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Resistant to novobiocin, bacitracin, vibriostatic agent O/129, lysozyme, metronidazole and optochin | It is resistant to novobiocin, bacitracin, vibriostatic agent O/129, lysozyme, metronidazole and optochin. |
How many ways can you rewrite this sentence?
However, several sentences are copy-paste, where rewrites were possible:
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Colonies after 2 days on P agar are circular, low-convex, smooth, glossy, opaque white and 2–6 millimeters in diameter. | Colonies after 2 days on P agar are circular, low-convex, smooth, glossy, opaque white and 2–6 mm in diameter. |
Growth occurs aerobically and anaerobically in the presence of 0–7·5% sodium chloride (NaCl). | Growth occurs aerobically and anaerobically in the presence of 0–7·5 % NaCl (w/v). |
Predominant fatty acids are ai-C15 : 0, i-C15 : 0 and ai-C17 : 0, whilst i-C17 : 0, C18 : 0, C16 : 0, C20 : 0 and i-C19 : 0 are present in moderate amounts | Predominant fatty acids are ai-C15 : 0, i-C15 : 0 and ai-C17 : 0, whilst i-C17 : 0, C18 : 0, C16 : 0, C20 : 0 and i-C19 : 0 are present in moderate amounts. |
In my opinion, the article should be removed, not just rewritten. I'm not doing so at this time as a CCI is just starting ,and it may be useful to leave this open for review.--S Philbrick(Talk) 15:31, 13 November 2013 (UTC)