Talk:Star Trek: Picard season 1/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Heartfox (talk · contribs) 03:58, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

Review forthcoming. Heartfox (talk) 03:58, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

   It's clear that extensive research has been conducted

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   waiting for comments below to be addressed

• other Star Trek media wikilink Star Trek

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• They did criticize However, they did criticize

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• while its darker and its darker (they're both criticisms, nothing being contrasted)

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• [8][4] footnote order

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• as someone who knows nothing about Star Trek stuff, I'm a bit confused as to who synthetics are and why they're important. Could a brief explanation be written?

• I'm not sure how much more I can say on this as there really isn't that much more to it, but I have tried to reword the whole section to be more clear. - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• the paragraph about stuff inspired by real-world events strikes me as important; could a sentence about these inspirations be mentioned in the lead?

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• [50][49] footnote order

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• For returning characters such as Troi and Riker, Clark intended for their costumes to be an evolution of their Next Generation costumes, wanting to maintain consistency with the main colors of their costumes across the two series. Clark wanted to move away from Seven of Nine's "classic silver catsuit" from Star Trek: Voyager, wanting to reflect her physical strength rather than her sexuality, and acknowledge the character's Robin Hood-like role in Picard as a member of vigilante group the Fenris Rangers. Can this be rephrased/changed so there aren't three "wants" in two sentences

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• 3D printing wikilink

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• The production referred to the first three episodes as 1, 2A, and 2B for logistical reasons not seeing anything about this in ref 67

• Should have just been ref 71 for that sentence. - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• partlyt partly

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• specialty channels Space name changed to CTV Sci-Fi Channel before airing

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• The announcement was accompanied by a video discussing the values of Star Trek and featuring Stewart, Kurtzman, and Star Trek: Discovery actors Sonequa Martin-Green, Anson Mount, and Michelle Yeoh is this that relevant to the section?

• I decided to remove this line. - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• The record was previously held by February 2019. The new January 2020 record includes the second-most new subscribers in a single week for the service during the week of Picard's premiere. Previously held by February 2019, the new January 2020

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• I would suggest adding Canadian viewership as well. here's some info

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• The average rating for each of the first season's individual episodes is 85% where is this stated?

• Looks like Rotten Tomatoes no longer states this with its other metrics. I think it is good to have, and should be fine to calculate the average based on the individual episode ratings listed in the source (per WP:CALC). - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

• TheVerge The Verge

•  Done - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

Nice article, Adamstom.97. Just a few comments above :) Heartfox (talk) 23:14, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for taking the time to review the article Heartfox. I have made some changes and responded to your points above. - adamstom97 (talk) 10:51, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

I think The Verge should be italicized but other than that, looks great :) Promoting momentarily. Heartfox (talk) 17:58, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

I have fixed that as well now. Thanks again! - adamstom97 (talk) 20:19, 14 July 2020 (UTC)