Talk:Star Wars: The Force Unleashed II/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 09:38, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   "The Nintendo handheld is designed around allowing players to quickly get into or out of the game.[9]" - I am confused about the "about"

   ? reworded, see if it's clearer --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

   What is "Slave I"?

   Y reworded --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

   Who are Ewoks?

   Y linked --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

   Many links missing in this section (Chewbacca, Han Solo, etc)

   ? linked to these characters, but I would need to know specifics as to what else needs wikilinked. --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   Ref 68 does not lead to any site

   ? There is no site to follow. Nintendo Power is a print-only magazine and I don't have access to the issue. --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

   In any event, that particular bit can be seen on Metacritic. I can replace it with an online source, if you want. —DAP388 (talk) 18:11, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

   The concern is that it states December as against October 22. Were there multiple reviews of Nintedo Power? It would be nice if you would replace it, DAP.--GoP_T^C_N 08:44, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

   Use pp only for several pages

   Y fixed --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

   Inconsistent date style

   Y fixed --Teancum (talk) 16:50, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall: These issues hinder the article's promotion to GA status--GoP_T^C_N 15:28, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

   Pass/Fail:

• Pass There is a minor issue regarding the Nintendo Power magazine. But as this is the only concern, I will promote this article. Regards.--GoP_T^C_N 16:21, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• If you want to take this to FAC in future: Prose needs to be simplified a bit for our general users, plot needs to be expanded if possible (I know it is remarked that the story is rather short and boring), the references should be high-quality, as the reviewers there are very nitpicky (for example, try remove the redundant references)--GoP_T^C_N 16:30, 12 July 2012 (UTC)