Talk:Star Wars Headspace/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Carbrera in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 04:52, 20 June 2016 (UTC)Reply


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Lead

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Composition

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Promotion and release

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Critical reception

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  • All good

Track listing and credits

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  • Remove "and credits" from the section title please
    • No other credits apart from writers or producers (if you don't count mastering as a credit). Track listing and credit sections already lists all credits, no need for an additional section or name change of Track listing and credits. Doing so would make the article more redundant. editorEهեইдအ😎 03:32, 22 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

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Other notes

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  • From what is included in this article, the album seemed to peak on several different record charts, so it is mandatory that this section exists
  • You could include an expanded "Credits and personnel" section here as well
    • No other credits apart from writers or producers (if you don't count mastering as a credit). Track listing and credit sections already lists all credits, no need for an additional section or name change of Track listing and credits. Doing so would make the article more redundant. editorEهեইдအ😎 03:31, 22 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • Although not 100% necessary, you could include a "Release history" section here too
  • There's only one artist in the template "Navboxes of artists from Star Wars Headspace"; shouldn't there be at least two for a navbox of this type to exist?

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Not a whole lot of bad here, just needs some further expansion in some parts. I'll place this article "On hold" for seven days to allow for any changes to the article! Good luck and cheers! Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 20:23, 21 June 2016 (UTC).Reply