Talk:Staurakios/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by CPA-5 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 14:35, 15 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

Claim my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 14:35, 15 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • seized the throne of the Byzantine Empire Link Byzantine Empire.
  •   Done
  • I see a lot of "howevers" for this short article.
  •   Done
  • to Nikephoros I and Procopia.[1][2][3] [4] Remove the extra space.
  •   Done
  • such as the Abbasid Caliph Harun al-Rashid --> "such as the Abbasid caliph Harun al-Rashid"
  •   Done
  • had been sent by the Bulgarian Khan Krum to relieve the city --> "had been sent by the Bulgarian khan Krum to relieve the city"
  •   Done
  • I see a some English differences like the words "travelled, judgement and rumors".
  •   Done
  • and officials of the Byzantine empire behind Michael --> "and officials of the Byzantine Empire behind Michael"
  •   Done
  • Maybe try to split the body into numerous sections or subsections?
  •   Done
  • from 26 July to 2 October 811. He was born some time after 778 Merge "some times".
  •   Done
  • likely due to the fact that Stephanos was the first to proclaim Staurakios Replace "due to the fact that" with "because".
  •   Done
  • No edit war.

Infobox

  • Little error with his death date.

Images

  • No date of the upload in the File:Solidus-Stauracius.jpg image?
  •   Done

Sources

  • No OR.
  • No location for Lawler's book?
  •   Done
  • Error in the Lilie, Ralph-Johannes; Ludwig, Claudia; Pratsch, Thomas; Zielke, Beate's source. Also please translate its title.
    Partially done; there is not a way within the template to translate the name, but I have added the title.
  • No location for Bury's books?
  •   Done
  • All sources are reliable and academic.

That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 11:01, 18 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

@CPA-5: Believe I have done all you ask. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:14, 11 October 2019 (UTC)Reply
@CPA-5: Repinging. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:09, 30 October 2019 (UTC)Reply