Talk:Stemcor

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Hi all, I have done an almost complete rewrite of this article. In the first version i) it wasn't clear what the company did; ii) information about the corporate restructuring was hidden at the bottom, despite that being what the company is known for; iii) it has lots of bulleted lists which were just PR language stripped from the website. I think this version is tidier, cleaner and doesn't omit any important details. Happy to chat / discuss. ScepticalChymist (talk) 16:16, 14 February 2018 (UTC)

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Please see below in reference to Stemcor:

http://www.fasttrack.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/The-Sunday-Times-HSBC-Top-Track-100-2018.pdf

Annabeldemorgan (talk) 15:45, 9 July 2018 (UTC)

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Please see below in regards to Stemcor:

https://www.ft.com/content/c9e18fe8-5c0e-11e8-ad91-e01af256df68

Please could the article be updated accordingly?

Annabeldemorgan (talk) 15:50, 9 July 2018 (UTC)

Way to get more of a response to suggested edits

Annabeldemorgan I took a look at your requests, and they are too vague - they require editors to do too much work to understand what you are requesting. Take a look at how this disclosed paid editor spells it out, with proposed text and its associated markup code, to make things easier. Talk:New_York_Life_Insurance_Company#Proposing_update_to_introduction TimTempleton ^{(talk) (cont)} 22:34, 3 August 2018 (UTC)