Talk:Stephen (song)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 23:36, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

• links to 1 disambiguation page

 Done

• 2 uncategorized redirects

Nothing wrong with links.

Lead / Infobox

• Formats are not used for songs. It isn't just available digitally, is it?

 Done

• Additional production should be shown in the infobox.

No clue how to do that, I've never seen that done before. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

• Link accordion

 Done

• Should specify that Pebe is her mother.

✗ Not done Added to body, not needed in the lead - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

• Done by Kesha? What about using performed?

 Done

• up its release --> up its release?

✗ Not done How is that ambiguous? Upon its release - the album release. No one will get that confused. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

• A little about what happens in the video?

✗ Not done It's not really needed in the lead as the article is short and should comply with LEAD. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

• and was released on the repackaging of the singer's debut album, Animal + Cannibal. --> Don't think this is relevant to the lead.

✗ Not done I believe it's relevant as it shows how and why the video was made, as opposed to being a single. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Writing and inspiration

• "Stephen" is a song written by Kesha Sebert, in collaboration with David Gamson, Pebe Sebert, and Oliver Leiber; the song's production was yielded by Gamson with additional co-production done by Lieber --> "Stephen" was written by Kesha Sebert, in collaboration with her mother Pebe Sebert, David Gamson and Oliver Leiber. The song's production was yielded by Gamson with additional production by Lieber.

 Done

• Done by Kesha, again

 Done

• Link accordion again

 Done

• six-teen --> sixteen

 Done

Composition

• "Stephen" is a song composed in the dance-pop genre; the song also incorporates country elements --> "Stephen" is a dance-pop song that also incorporates elements of country music.

 Done

• According to digital sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Sony-ATV Music Publishing --> No need to state this.

✗ Not done - See WP:MUSICNOTES, this is a required inclusion since the day this website was deemed reliable. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

• Music sample?

Will add later, I just haven't had a change to upload it. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Critical reception

• A few issues with the use of quotation marks in a quote, and the lack of a colon before a quote. The rest is pretty well done.

 Done Believe I corrected them, if not being bold would be much appreciated. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Music video

• who have also direct videos for the singer's songs --> who have also directed videos for Kesha's

 Done Oops, didn't notice the grammatical mistake. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

• and an alternative video for the song "Take It Off" --> and an alternative video of "Take It Off"

 Done

• under its re-release Animal + Cannibal. --> entitled Animal + Cannibal

 Done

• The video's synopsis opens --> The video opens...

 Done

Track listing

• No need for this. "Stephen" was never released as track one on anything.

✗ Not done - There's no rule about this other than personal preference and not something to argue. The track listing is included to show how the track is available for purchase, whether being a single or not is irrelevant. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 04:46, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Charts

• Upon the release of Animal, "Stephen" debuted and peaked at number at eighty-nine on the issue date of January 3, 2010, on the South Korea Gaon International Songs Chart; it was the ninth highest debuting album track from its parent album. --> Split into two sentences.

 Done

• Everything looks good for me. I am passing the article; great work! Don't forget about the sample! Statυs (talk) 05:20, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

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