Talk:Stephen Larigaudelle Dubuisson/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Ergo Sum in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 17:26, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- Maybe indicate in the lead the year he was sent back to Rome?
- " it also had connections to the French minor nobility." - Citation needed
- " impending violence ini Saint-Domingue," - "ini" appears to be a typo
- "When Jan Roothaan was succeeded Fortis as Superior General" - I don't think was should be in there
- "With the arrival of Peter Kenney as visitor to the Maryland mission, Dubuisson was made a consultor to the visitor" - When did this occur? It's used as a time frame in which Dubuisson was sent to Frederick, and the timing of this isn't clear.
- Added the year Kenney was appointed since the source doesn't explicitly say when Dubuisson was made consultor. Ergo Sum 17:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
- For some reason, the two citations to Buckley 2013 p. 182 aren't merging together. Can you get these two citations merged together, as they're appearing as ref 39 and ref 40 separately despite being the same thing
- Sources look okay for reliability. Buckley is used heavily, but I think Cline is used enough that the reliance is okay for GA standards. For FA, you'll want to diversify sourcing so you're less reliant on a single source.
- There are other sources that say many of the same things as Buckley. I can swap out some references to Buckley for those before an eventual nomination for FA. Ergo Sum 17:16, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
- Image licensing looks okay.
I think that's it for GA status, I'll be placing it on hold. Hog Farm Talk 16:34, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you, Hog Farm. Ergo Sum 17:16, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
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