Talk:Sternenfels

Latest comment: 6 years ago by InternetArchiveBot in topic External links modified

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I've de derated this article to C. There are some points to be taken care of:

  • minor grammar and English spelling: e.g. "... Within the 14. century, ..."
  • missing sections: climate, culture
  • refs for history section (I know this is hard to find in English, hint: use German sources ;-).
  • section economy, government and town twinning should be created and written in prose.
  • Peculiar Buildings and landmarks is a list.

Nevertheless, this is a very good article. Keep on with your good work. Sebastian scha. (talk) 02:54, 27 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

Thnx for the feedback - done some update work now. What about an uprate :)?--Polentario (talk) 12:39, 28 October 2008 (UTC)--Polentario (talk) 12:39, 28 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

Much better. For rating this B, it should be reviewed by a natural English speaking editor (Muttersprachler). I feel some mistakes (but I'm not confident enough myself). Maybe ask for a peer eview. Also you should consider to change the references in a {{citation}} style template. Sebastian scha. (talk) 23:05, 29 October 2008 (UTC)Reply
Yes. Thats great! Is there any information about Transport? A major road a train station? The English mistakes I felt are gone now. IMHO it's a B Sebastian scha. (talk) 12:37, 20 October 2009 (UTC)Reply
Thnx! Public transport is based on bus lines, sternenfels is sort of hub for local countryside roads but not a major one. --Polentario (talk) 22:00, 5 January 2010 (UTC)Reply
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