Talk:Strago Magus

Latest comment: 6 months ago by Pokelego999 in topic GA Review

Linking directly to GameFAQs URLs

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Gamefaqs has an anti-leech mechanism set up, you can do what some articles do and mention that it requires a cut and paste of the URL, or find another source.--BigCow 20:49, 27 July 2006 (UTC)Reply

Lore Detail

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I deleted all of the specific content regarding the individual lores due to it being non-encyclopedic. That info belongs on GameFAQs, not Wikipedia.LoveCowboy2024 19:00, 29 January 2007 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Strago Magus/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Kung Fu Man (talk · contribs) 14:56, 27 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 12:43, 17 May 2024 (UTC)Reply


Will take this on in the coming days. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 12:43, 17 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Six GA Criteria

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1. Article is well-written. Very minimal mistakes if any at all.

2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.

3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the character.

4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.

5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.

6. Article uses two fair use images with proper rationale, and uses one music file with proper rationale.

Lead

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-Hyperlink Relm

  • Fixed

Appearances

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-"One the party rescues Relm and brings her to him, he snaps out of his stupor and rejoins them." Patch up typos and sentence structure here.

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-Is Hidon the monster or the friend? Reword that sentence for clarity.

  • Fixed

Conception and design

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-"and the daughter of a friend he took in acting as her grandfather." Confused on the meaning of the wording here.

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Critical reception

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-"of how Final Fantasy VI's large cast caused meant" Delete one of caused or meant.

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-The bit about quests isn't elaborated on before the Reception and pretty confusing to those outside of the FF series's scope.

  • Rewrote the appearances bit to mention Ebot's Rock to help make this clearer.

Overall

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-Looks mostly good. Fix the above and this should be good to go. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 15:53, 24 May 2024 (UTC)Reply