Talk:Straight Outta Cold Beer/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:11, 3 September 2017 (UTC)
Lead
edit- Within its first two weeks → I think you should add "...of availablity," here
- on the Country Digital Songs component chart → on [[Billboard (magazine)|Billboard]]''{{'s}}
Infobox
edit- Flawless ;)
Background and composition
edit- You say "Shelton began working on If I'm Honest," but you never mention the date he commenced
- as the parent album's → you don't need "parent" here
- to the singer's tenth studio album, If I'm Honest (2016). → you can just say "to the record" here as you have both mentioned and linked the album before
- Shelton also boasts → You may want to say "the singer" here for alternation
Reception
edit- And regarding the subject matter → "And" has to go
- debuted at the number 36 → "the" is superfluous
- twenty-third → 23rd
- in its first week available → in its first week of availability
Track listing
edit- Flawless ;)
Charts
edit- Flawless ;)
Other stuff
editCopy-violation
edit- 45.1% is okay if I have the quote in mind
References
edit- As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
Outcome
edit- Very nice job with the article. I put it On hold for 7 days! Hve some fun with my comments, Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:26, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
- Cartoon network freak – I completed addressing your concerns. Thank you very much. Carbrera (talk) 18:57, 9 September 2017 (UTC).
- Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:17, 9 September 2017 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.