Talk:Straight Outta Cold Beer/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:11, 3 September 2017 (UTC)

Lead

• Within its first two weeks → I think you should add "...of availablity," here
• on the Country Digital Songs component chart → on [[Billboard (magazine)|Billboard]]''{{'s}}

Infobox

• Flawless ;)

Background and composition

• You say "Shelton began working on If I'm Honest," but you never mention the date he commenced
• as the parent album's → you don't need "parent" here
• to the singer's tenth studio album, If I'm Honest (2016). → you can just say "to the record" here as you have both mentioned and linked the album before
• Shelton also boasts → You may want to say "the singer" here for alternation

Reception

• And regarding the subject matter → "And" has to go
• debuted at the number 36 → "the" is superfluous
• twenty-third → 23rd
• in its first week available → in its first week of availability

Track listing

• Flawless ;)

Charts

• Flawless ;)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 45.1% is okay if I have the quote in mind

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

Outcome

• Very nice job with the article. I put it  On hold for 7 days! Hve some fun with my comments, Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:26, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

• Cartoon network freak – I completed addressing your concerns. Thank you very much. Carbrera (talk) 18:57, 9 September 2017 (UTC).

Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:17, 9 September 2017 (UTC)

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