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Hate to say it people, but this article smacks of an advertisement. The episode descriptions look like they were lifted off an ad. This article needs to be overhauled. 75.143.103.39 (talk) 21:52, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
Engineer
editThe article describes Mr. Hackett as an engineer. I'm not disputing this is possible. But an "engineer" is a specific thing, and I think that the article might benefit by supporting the application of this title, or qualifying what exactly Mr. Hackett's professional / educational background is that supports the title of "engineer". Unless verifiable references show up that support the title of "engineer" for Mr. Hackett, I will probably remove it. No ill-will intended, it's just that an "engineer" is a specific thing. Johnny Squeaky (talk) 04:30, 1 October 2011 (UTC)
COI
editThe majority of this "article" was written / edited by the subject. This is obviously a COI issue. Johnny Squeaky (talk) 04:35, 1 October 2011 (UTC)
Advert
editThe way in which this "article" is written is not objective, and for the most part self-promotion. The text itself bares strong resemblance to text from the show's Web site. Further, as noted above, it was mostly written by the subject and so suffers from COI bias. The actual size of the "article" would be about half if all the self-promotional cruft was taken out. Also as noted above, Mr. Hackett *is not* an "engineer" but rather an artist. Let's keep things factual. Johnny Squeaky (talk) 18:03, 1 October 2011 (UTC)
Sources
editList them here. --Lexein (talk) 01:19, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
- "AlphaDogs Post Production Completes Pilot For The Science Channel". December 22, 2010. DMN Newswire. Press release