Talk:Sud-Est SE.200 Amphitrite

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Herenow44 in topic Need Help w/ Change
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Need Help w/ Change

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I was going to make a grammar change to the following sentence: “The remains of the first SE.200 were raised by Dornier in 1966.[6]”

Its the Final sentence before the 1st sub category Operators. However:


1- It’s completely unclear what the sentence is trying to describe… (Remains of what and Revived from where??? i.e. The physical pieces of the parts were retrieved from the bomb site - doubtful).

2- It’s cited with a reference so didnt feel comfortable editing or removing it outright given the sentences lack of clarity.

3 - The reference link works but only provides an archived picture of the plane, no wording @ all to use for clarification OR validation.

4 - I could not find anything after a few brief searches about Dornier, The se.200 or any info from 1966 that correlates the 2.

It appears to be the original wording from the pages creation date. Not sure if this was just looked over or if I’m missing something but any help is greatly appreciated so I know I’m not crazy. Herenow44 (talk) 03:28, 20 February 2022 (UTC)Reply