Talk:Suitcase/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Benmite in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Cessaune (talk · contribs) 05:09, 25 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

I'm going to review this. It seems interesting. Likely timeline: two weeks. Cessaune [talk] 05:09, 25 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

Here we go.
Illustrated:  Y
  • Images are definitely representative.
  • Airports are mentioned frequently, so I think an image of a baggage carousel with suitcases on it would be a good way to tie everything together.
Stable:  Y
  • No edit warring or major conflicts.
Broad:  Y
  • It goes into extensive detail about the history of luggage. Defintely broad in its coverage.
Okay, this was the easy part. I'll finish the rest in a few days. Cessaune [talk] 02:36, 5 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
Well-written:  Y
The prose is fine. Nothing insane, but it's good.
Verifiable:  Y
Every paragraph has multiple inline citations; all the citations point to relevant websties and are reliable.
Neutral:  Y
Follows DUE, FRINGE, etc.
Normally I have so much to say. Anyway, good job! It passed!
Benmite, have you thought about a DYK nom? Maybe something about the "femininity" of rolling suitcases? Cessaune [talk] 11:44, 16 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
@Cessaune: Thanks so much for the review! I'll definitely consider doing the DYK nom, especially since I was personally surprised when I found out the reason it took so long for us to put wheels on suit cases en masse. benǝʇᴉɯ 02:30, 18 June 2023 (UTC)Reply