Talk:Sukhoi Su-35/GA3

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 16:45, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links OK.
• Photos appropriately licensed
• Use title case on all English-language article and book titles.
• improve its capacity as an air-to-ground platform Wouldn't "abilities" be a better word than capacity?
• Missing a comma after the thrust rating: Luylka AL-31FM turbofan engine which is larger, more reliable and, with a thrust of 125 kN (28,200 lbf) is more powerful
• Why is Su-35 italicized here? re-designated its fighter the Su-35.
• Provide a link to aerial refueling on first use.
• Is there an article on Vladimirovka air base? If not redlink it anyway.
• Does the Su-35 have a NATO code name?

• I don't exactly know what the c/n for the updated Su-35 is, but the c/n of the first Su-35 was Flanker-E. Since the Su-35 refers to two aircraft, how do I make it clear that "Flanker-E" only refers to the first? --Sp33dyphil ©^hat_ontributions 08:07, 14 October 2013 (UTC)

• Say exactly that; and that the codename, if any, of the second version of the Su-35 is unknown.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:42, 14 October 2013 (UTC)

• There's a lot of overlinking that needs to be cleaned up.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:45, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

I believe I have addressed all the issues. --Sp33dyphil ©^hat_ontributions 08:45, 19 October 2013 (UTC)

Overlinks still exist for flight-control system, avionics, Defense Ministry, F-5E/F. Otherwise looks good. Fix these and we'll be done here.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:30, 20 October 2013 (UTC)

I have removed all the duplicate links. --Sp33dyphil ©^hat_ontributions 22:52, 25 October 2013 (UTC)