Talk:Sun Shao (general)

Rewrite Version 1

I've rewritten this article to remove the conversational (read: NON-ENCYCLOPEDIC!) tone used within, as well as to attempt to establish the notability of this character. The 188 date of birth is approximate, and based on the statement that he was 12 when adopted by Sun Ce (just prior to the latter's death). If someone's up to making a WikiProject:Three Kingdoms, there's a ton of articles in this time period that sorely need help! (Not it: I'm already involved in too many projects as is, and that's before WikiPedia!) If anyone can update this article with info from the Sanguozhi, that'd be highly appreciated, but if not, at least we've got a much better start here. Cheers! -- Miwa * talk * contribs ^_^ 00:32, 25 May 2006 (UTC)

Division needed

This article needs to be divided between factual and fictional accounts. Just a heads up for anybody interested. Gamer Junkie 22:23, 18 July 2007 (UTC)

Dealt with by removing all fictional accounts. Snuge purveyor (talk) 09:07, 9 January 2012 (UTC)

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