Talk:Sunshine Days

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:20, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

Issues

General

• No dab links. Great work!
• No dead links. Great work!
• Images have good rationales

Infobox

• No issues

Lede

• Unlink American per WP:OVERLINK
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• "The episode first aired in the United States on May 12, 2002 on the Fox network" → "It originally aired on the Fox network on May 12, 2002"
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• "unconnected to the series' wider mythology" should be "a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the overarching fictional history of The X-Files"
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• To many "The episode", consider re-writing.
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:31, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 6.2 and was viewed by 6.5 million households and 10.4 million viewers in its initial broadcast" → "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 6.2, was viewed by 6.5 million households, and 10.4 million viewers in its initial broadcast"
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• finale should be final
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

Plot

• Link California
  • I linked Van Nuys, CA instead.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• Add actor for Blake and Mike
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• "was where the popular television series The Brady Bunch was filmed" → "where the comedy series The Brady Bunch was filmed. This is partly per WP:NPOV
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• "Later that night" add comma
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• Actor for Martin
  • It's already there.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• discovers should be discover
• Add actor for Fogelman
  • Fogleman is the same person as Martin.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:15, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• Add actor for Oliver Martin
  • It's already there.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:15, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• Add actor for various others
  • Where are the other ones your are talking about? I didn't mention them in the prose and citing the whole Brady Family would be ridiculous.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• Link Washington, DC
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• Should be "Washington, D.C." not "Washington, DC"
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

Production

• finale should be final
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• "The Brady Bunch house set featured in the episode was built "from scratch". Huh?
  • Rephrased.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

Broadcast and reception

• Link Nielsen household rating to Nielsen ratings
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• "Fox Broadcasting Company promoted the episode with the promise that it was the "most bizarre" episode of The X-Files to ever been shown". Firstly, Fox Broadcasting Company should be Fox. Secondly, Fox should not be linked as it is already linked above
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

References

• Unlink season 9, and 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment as it already linked above
  • Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
• The Hollywood Reporter is missing publisher (Prometheus Global Media). The current one is incorrect
  • According to its page, that's its owner, not publisher, but I'll switch it.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

External links

• Nothing to be fixed

That's all. On hold, and great work! TBrandley 03:40, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

I believe I've got everything.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)