Talk:Super Mario Galaxy 2/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk) 22:12, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

I'll give the article a read through now and leave comments below. Miyagawa (talk) 22:12, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

• Setting and level design: Second paragraph needs to be cited towards the end.
• Plot: Second paragraph needs to be cited.
• Music:The end of the first and third paragraphs need to be cited.
• Reception: "making it among the most critically acclaimed video games of all time" - bit fluffy, would be better if there was some sort of quote you could use to that effect or to make it more neutral.
• Fourth paragraph is completely uncited, needs cites for each of those scores.
• "new best game on Wii" - needs a direct reference for the quote, and also needs to be in speech marks in order to be in the same format as the other quotes. Game Informer "frustrating" quote needs a reference too.
• Nintendo Power is missing a cite in the scores table.
• Awards: Needs citations for each of those magazines.
• References: All the references need to be formatted the same way. 24, 25, 26, 43, 46 and 61 are bare urls. 50 and 60 are only the titles. They need to be gone through very thoroughly as quite a lot of the minimum expected information is missing. In addition reference 12 is a deadlink.

Given that it's quite a lot of work, I'm going to fail this for now. Once the work has been completed, please feel free to resubmit at GAN. Miyagawa (talk) 22:33, 16 January 2011 (UTC)