Talk:Super Robot Wars XO/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 15:11, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Immediate Failures

• It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria -
• It contains copyright infringements -
• It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include{{cleanup}}, {{POV}}, {{unreferenced}} or large numbers of {{citation needed}}, {{clarify}}, or similar tags. (See also {{QF-tags}}). -
• It is not stable due to edit warring on the page. -

Prose

Lede

• Part of the company's Super Robot Wars series - better would be to say which entry in the Super Robot Wars series it is. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:15, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • I had considered doing that while writing this. Ultimately, I chose not to, as there's an incredible amount of Super Robot Wars games that writing something like "The twenty-sixth installment" didn't sit well with me.
• is Super Robot Wars GC not notable? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:15, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Probably not. Frankly I haven't done an in-depth search like I did with this game, but all I could find at first glance was a GameSpot preview. I will consider making a page if there's more coverage.
• They aren't "installments", they are games in a series. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:15, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • I've seen the word "installments" be used many times to discuss an entry in a game series, so I don't think it's necessarily incorrect. I can still change it if you insist it doesn't belong there. Namcokid47 23:47, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
• increased hardware capabilities and online support - increased from what? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:15, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

General

• is it a "fleet of mechas" as per lede, or "fleet of mecha" in body? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:21, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
• Could we get some ALTtext? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:21, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • It's "fleet of mechas". I made a typo.
• Super Robot Wars GC (2004) - expand "released in 2004" for example. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:21, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Done.
• pilot cut-in animations - probably "additional animations" would suffice. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:21, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Done.
• "a different flavor" - if this is a quote, who said it. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:21, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Removed the quote and just said they wanted it to be different from the usual style of the series.
• "The Scrap Heap", any reason for title case? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:21, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Defined that it is the collective title she gave to the worst games.
• I feel this article needs a bit more notes on how it sold in comparrison to the original game. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:21, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Added that it sold significantly less than GC.

GA Review

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Review meta comments

• I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:11, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Lee Vilenski: Adressed your comments. Namcokid47 23:47, 6 March 2021 (UTC)